what is love
if you cant trust the person you thought
you love thinking we gone be together
forever when we had are first real fight and
didnt stop talking and made up. are first
kiss sweet and soft said i love you and lets
not fight again when we had are first real
talk on the phone talk for hours about what
we wont of this.change pictures and are fb
satus thought it was love but it was just
lies till this day i will never forget are date 2.22.11.
first dance 6ft 7ft song just goes to show i thought
i could trust you with my heart but you broke it and drag
it alone yea i will always love you but it hard to see you
every day and know your not mines i rember when we broke
up i cryed and cryed cause i never knew my feelings
could be hurt like this in side i say never agian there goes
how much im still hurting yea i know being single
is good for me but one day i wish you come to me
and say baby im sorry i did do wrong and i wont
you back as i write this its brings tears to my eyes i wont
you to feel the hurt the tears i feel inside sometimes
i think in my head what did i do wrong why was i treated this way
love is a strong word but i meant it when i said it tears come down and some times i regreat it
forever 2.22.11<3
April 1st, 2011 at 11:22 am
nice poem..but did u write it 4 sum 1 or did u just rite it 4 fun????
April 1st, 2011 at 11:23 am
This is sad/: It brings tears to my eyes too. You get so attached to someone then they break your heart. Just remember everything happens for a reason girl! Thats what everybody tells me. Just stay strong and confident. If something is meant to happen its gonna happen. Dont let people get in the way. I know i did. I know this world is cold and decieving but sometimes you gotta just keep your head of like your nose is bleeding. Great Job!
April 1st, 2011 at 11:29 am
your poem is sad are you going to keep writing sad poems?
did you meen for it to be sad or is that just how the expirence was?
is this a true story?
are you going to keep writing about real expirences?
April 1st, 2011 at 11:36 am
bryam
i wrote it for somebodii that was close to me <3
April 1st, 2011 at 11:38 am
thxs allison
April 1st, 2011 at 11:41 am
i wrote this base on my expirence
and yes im going to keep writeing on
real life expierence and i will write on sad nd happy poems
and this is true
May 3rd, 2011 at 5:47 am
I enjoyed reading this even though it was sad. It actually made me think back to a certain heartache I felt long ago….
I think that’s a sign of good writing: it’s real and it helps a reader feel something or experience something. I hope you continue writing and blogging!